Criterion
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4
A-level qualities (90100) |
3
B-level qualities (8089) |
2
C-level qualities (7079) |
1
F-level qualities (below 70) |
Score
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| Purpose |
Introduces and presents paper effectively and clearly; purpose is readily apparent to the reader |
Introduces and presents paper adequately; purpose is clear throughout the paper |
Introduces and presents paper somewhat effectively; writing has a clear purpose but may sometimes digress from it |
Introduces and presents paper poorly; purpose is generally unclear |
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| Development and content |
Develops paper in a sophisticated manner, providing a robust and accurate analysis of sustainability concepts and of their applicability to the orgnaization involved |
Develops paper as assigned, providing an accurate and effective analysis of sustainability concepts and of their applicability to the orgnaization involved |
Does not fully develop paper as assigned, may fail to provide an accurate picture or an effective analysis of the organization or leader; analysis is basic or general |
Paper is undeveloped and completely misunderstands the need to provide analysis of sustainability concepts and their applicability to the orgnaization involved; paper does not relate to the assignment |
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| Makes sophisticated and persuasive suggestions for the change initiative and indicates how they would have a positive effect; describes a viable strategy; addresses stakeholder engagement thoroughly |
Makes logical and practical suggestions for the change initiative indicates how they would have a positive effect; describes a reasonable strategy; addresses stakeholder engagement |
Suggestions for change are somewhat vague and not very persuasive; there may be no indication of the positive effect they will have; strategy is either unclear or not viable; leaves out a dicussion of stakeholder engagement or addresses it poorly |
Makes little or no attempt to sugget a viable sustainability intiative; no strategy is evident |
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| Refers to both the Senge and Wirtenberg texts frequently and in highly appropriate ways; provides a critical assessment of both texts and makes reasonable and insightful comments |
Refers to both the Senge and Wirtenberg texts \in appropriate ways and makes effective use of their concepts | Refers to both the Senge and Wirtenberg texts but does so in a vague or confusing manner or neglects to refer to one of the texts at all; applies one or both texts in ways that are inappropriate or impractical |
Does not refer to the Senge and Wirtenberg texts at all or makes statements that indicate little understanding of these text concepts; applications are unreasonable |
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| Documentation and support |
Ideas are supported effectively and sources are clearly attributed |
Ideas are generally supported and paper includes clear attribution |
Attribution may be present, but sources are questionable or style is incorrect; some statements are unsubstantiated and the source of some ideas is unclear |
Attribution is missing, or sources given are poorly chosen, or sources have not been used |
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| Organization |
Arranges ideas clearly and logically to support the purpose or argument; ideas flow smoothly and are effectively linked; reader can follow the line of reasoning |
Arranges ideas adequately to support the purpose or argument; links between ideas are generally clear; reader can follow the line of reasoning for the most part |
Arranges ideas adequately, in general, although ideas sometimes fail to make sense together; reader remains fairly clear about what writer intends |
Arranges ideas illogically; ideas frequently fail to make sense together; reader cannot identify a line of reasoning and becomes frustrated or loses interest |
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| Writing mechanics |
Writing demonstrates a sophisticated clarity, conciseness, and correctness |
Writing is accomplished in terms of clarity and conciseness and contains only a few errors |
Writing lacks clarity or conciseness and contains numerous errors |
Writing is unfocused, rambling, or contains serious errors |
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| APA format |
Uses APA format accurately and consistently |
Uses APA format with minor violations |
Reflects incomplete knowledge of APA format |
Does not use APA format |
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